I'm screwed by Screw~ XD

[machimaro037]

whoah~such a long hiatus..
being a daigaku no seito wa taihen desu ne~~

yesterday, i was googling for the lyrics of Hey!Say!Jump - Screw and its translation..then I found keiraryoko's page which has both kanji n romaji lyrics. i try to find the translation but none has been found.

suddenly i feel that i want to try to translate it by myself using a very good online dictionary : jisho.org/ recommended by my friend that have been studying in Japan. I've spend the whole night translating this song..when i finished, suddenly i thought of checking again if there are any of HSJ fans has translated this song. So, i may check if my translation is accurate or not. LUCKILY THERE IS ONE!!! i found kodochalover's page and she has translated that song. 

as soon as i read her translation..i was laughing out hard (its already 3.00 am girl!!!!) bcoz my translation is totally different with hers..LOL~~ in her translation..the lyric was like about love btween a couple that the girl is a person who doesn't talk much about her feelings towards his lover and it makes him SCREWED! but my translation was like the girl is not interested of their relationship anymore n her lover cannot accept that the girl doesn't love him anymore..LOL~~ XDDD

this is my version :

The moment when you whisper your love

Why do you make such a lonely face?

Hiding it in your heart

Your voice, i wanted to listen to it

The sound of wind outside the window is sneering at me 

 

‘LOVE’, when you murmured the word with that smile

Except the two character,that kind of feeling

Tell me and convey that to me

Your love is over, your feelings/affection is over

My heart is breaking

 

Love is rura rura painful

Rura rura it is cold

There is no hopes for this feeling to wander about

Therefore rura rura it is the worst

Rura rura rura it has been showed

The countless feelings/affection in the air has ended

 

I remembered when I accidentally embraced you

Covering you by my side

It has been accumulated, my heart was paused

Your voice, that gesture/action

All are going to be washed away

 

Love is rura rura painful

Rura rura it is cold

However, it is a brief and fragile thing that appear

Therefore rura rura it is the worst

Rura rura rura it has been showed

The unconveyed feelings started to overflowing

 

The wind has spread and deliver it

My love for you will never end

 

Love is rura rura painful

Rura rura it is cold

There is no hopes for this feeling to wander about

Therefore rura rura it is the worst

Rura rura rura it has been showed

The countless feelings/affection in the air has ended
 

i'm still giggling while posting this one you know~~ ;P
please forgive me yabu-kun for 'ruining' your lovely song..gomen ne~~

here's the more accurate one



see..even dai-chan n hika also laugh at my translation~~ T____T



P/S: everyone has their 1st time..so don't bash me..but correct me..at least i have effort to get to know what my 'babies' were singing right~~ =)

Comments

[hansuke2212.livejournal.com]

thanks for translating :)

[machimaro.livejournal.com]

you're welcome~ =)

[arshav.livejournal.com]

this is interesting,, LoL thanks XD

[machimaro.livejournal.com]

u're welcome..i'm glad u're interested..LOL~ XD

[kodochalover.livejournal.com]

lol x) you're cute^^
Actually, I got both the same feelings from the song xD that 1. She wasnt speaking her emotions well and 2) Perhaps she wasn't feeling the same in the end as the lover xP

So don't bash yourself for it :) Your translation came in really close and I give you kudos for that xD

[machimaro.livejournal.com]

LOL..i'm glad that you feel the same as me~ XD
please give me guidance for future translation okay?

actually i want to translate you gotta more 1st..but the words is somehow difficult to translate, so i switch to Screw instead.. ;P

Thanks for your kudos~ *hugs*

[gloriaari.livejournal.com]

first i wanna say that i likkkkkkkke this song so much that i go rurarura all day long xp
actually i have read both trans, and i like you interpretation:)
BEST members have really grown up!

[machimaro.livejournal.com]

haha..yeah!me to!!!
when i listen to this song at 1st..the only word that being captured fastly in my mind was that 'rurarura'.. ;P

agree!sometimes when i watch BEST performances..i don't see them as my 'babies' anymore..LOL~ XD

[gloriaari.livejournal.com]

lol good job, yabu!

i understand i understandddd
but i still cant help laughing every time they try to act sexy[sorry BESTxp]

[machimaro.livejournal.com]

yeah~~so true!!!
they may be kakkoi at sometimes..but sexy? hm..i'll think about it first~~ ;P

[gloriaari.livejournal.com]

exactly!xp

[riko-narumi.livejournal.com]

thanks! this trans is neat. I understand your version and the other one. I kind of felt both would make sense. It's like, you choose which suits your mood. :3

[machimaro.livejournal.com]

u're welcome.. ^^

yeah..i think so..it's my melancholic mood at that time i guess~~ XDD

[kawaii032690.livejournal.com]

.hahaha...that okay....your translation is actually great.....many are happy with it....thank you so much.....goodluck in studying japanese.....^^

[machimaro.livejournal.com]

thanks kawaii-chan~~ ^^
yeah..i'll study japanese with more efforts..hope that i can be fluent in that language~~ =)

[kawaii032690.livejournal.com]

i hope too......so that you can help some JUMP fans who aren't able to understand japanese.....more power.....GANBARE!!!!.....^^

[machimaro.livejournal.com]

arigatou~~ ^^
thanks for motivating me kawaii-chan~~ (^_^)v

[kawaii032690.livejournal.com]

you're welcome....^^

.goodluck in studying it......like i always said..more power.....and always smile and always take care....^^

[machimaro.livejournal.com]

i will~~
thanks again kawaii-chan.. ^^

[kawaii032690.livejournal.com]

you're always welcome machi-chan~.....<3